Why yes, the first four chapters are done to my satisfaction. In their glorious entirety. Which is not to say I won’t let y’all help me make them better.
Features of interest?
–Frost trolls remain angsty. They pose like models in Vogue
–Hild gets her first POV scene
–I’ve started every single intertwining plot thread
Tomorrow I’ll return to writing through the threads. I’ve decided not to bake the Widow. I know it’s classic, but classic sometimes is code for cliche. Her ending should be scarier. And costly.
Hope your words are flowing.
Catherine