Thanks to Brian Kellof The Eyeball Afterlife fame, I found about The Five Randoms‘ Hook Contest.
It works like this: Fifty hooks are reviewed. Hooks can be revised and re-submitted Friday, based on feedback. The prize? The top five hooks will get to submit page one of the manuscript, and then agent Wendy Schmalz chooses one of the first chapters to read.
My hook is number 7, and I’ve already integrated the feedback from the comments that are there, but if you want to offer up any suggestions to my or the other hooks, I’m sure they’d be appreciated.
BTW, feeling loads better. Love my drugs. We couldn’t have done this a week ago, huh? Last time I listen to my urgent care guy.
Catherine
