It’s like I have new eyes.
I worked through more of chapter 9, and there’s suddenly so much sharpening to be done that I just couldn’t see before. It makes me want to go back to the beginning and wield the editing scalpel.
But I won’t until I’m through the whole manuscript yet again, and then, when my kind readers are looking over the rewrite, I will turn those merciless new peepers onto it as well.
Needless to say, rewriting progress.