Dutifully spent an hour tonight working on chapters 1-4 sent by writing workshop fellow Jenn. Jenn was clamoring for more transitions, so I went at it.
Also began keeping a list of suggested characterization and organization revisions. I’m going to go back to writing this all the way through, see where the characters go and what they become, and then go back to hammering this all out.
Feel like I put in a good night of work.