Chapter one weighs in around 17 pages. The new improved version makes you feel sorry for Jensina and Wort. I hope the trick of not coming back to Wort until chapter three or four works to keep the reader in the loop, because I’ve got to set up my young trolls next.
Keep weighing in on that label post. I’m finding that information fascinating and useful for class!
Scene count:
4 / 56 words. 7% done!
Catherine
