Notes from Another Revision Cave

Like pulling teeth today, we have some new words for Hulk Hercules. I have the foundations for the fall festival scene and Leo asking Diana out. Both are sketchy. More importantly, I have figured out the Dalton/Bianca/Tim plot, and have integrated a couple of place holders to get that into the story. I did some plotting and rearranging. Next session I’ll buff up those two scenes. So the Herc-o-meter hasn’t really budged, but the overall percentage is smaller.

Zokutou word meterZokutou word meter
15 / 41
(36.6%)

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In Substance, Chapter 8 has been divided and trimmed. I think it’s full of melodrama and transitional events. Next up: Chapter 9, which requires Milo-lization.

Zokutou word meterZokutou word meter
261 / 386
(67.6%)

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I also updated my time lines and lists. This helps me refresh my brain. 😉

Author: Catherine Schaff-Stump

Catherine Schaff-Stump writes fiction for children and young adults. Her most recent book, The Vessel of Ra, is the first book in the Klaereon Scroll series. She is currently working on its sequel, as well as penning the middle grade adventures of Abigail Rath, monster hunter.

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