Revised 10 pages of chapter one yesterday. It really wasn’t very descriptive, sort of abbreviated. No one told me. Hmmm.
Maybe I need tougher readers. 🙂
At any rate, I’m happier with it now. Much.
Catherine
In the face of darkness, high stakes, and horrible odds, you can save yourself and the world
Revised 10 pages of chapter one yesterday. It really wasn’t very descriptive, sort of abbreviated. No one told me. Hmmm.
Maybe I need tougher readers. 🙂
At any rate, I’m happier with it now. Much.
Catherine